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Location: The U.S. of A.
Job: Karate Instructor
Hence, during swiftness, be like the wind. During Stillness, be like the forest. During aggression, be like fire. During immobility, be like the mountain. Be as unknowing as the dark. Move like a thunderbolt. Sun Tzu's The Art of War
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It certainly wasn't the best game I've played today but it certainly wasn't the worst. You did many things right, it had a story, not an intricate plot mind you but most games don't even have that much.
The gameplay took a little getting used to but it was fine after a few tries.
The drawing were decent, much better than most but unfortunantly nothing to brag about (better than I could probably do though :P)
The music I think was a good choice. It is true with most every game though that the music gets old after a while. After playing your game for a little bit I found myself looking for additional music choices just to mix it up a little.
On the topic of sound: Your sound effects were good but the witches voice was painful (for lack of a better word). I'm sure it was meant to be screechy but lets just say I'm glad you had subtitles as I found it hard to understand her.
All in all it was a good game, it seemed well thought out :)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the constructive review, I will try and use your points to improve my next game especially the one about more than one choice of music.
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But you can just can find videos of people doung parkour all over the internet. So I wasn't blown away or anything. It looked like you just ytaced over actual video clips, not bad but for an animation the movements almost seemed too... realistic. I'm not sure if that's the best way to describe it but hopefully you've gotten what I'm trying to convey.
Perhaps rather than tracing you just used a video to get concepts and some specifics for drawings of your own.
Speaking of drawings, even though they were traced they could have been a lot better. They needed to be more refined, cleaner.
But none the less it was pretty cool, good luck on your next submission :)
Author's Response:
thanks for your advice :) i'm now working on my drawing skills on flash so i can make a new parkour flash with my own graphics XD
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This, as far as I know, is rather unique, good idea.
It was fun but I didn't find myself addicted to it or anything.
All in all a good game, I can't find anything wrong with it. Keep up the good work :)
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Thanks for the review :)
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First of all it was short, just an observation.
The drawings were decent, i do like your style but it's not my favorite or anything.
the music was ok, I'm not sure that it fit but I'm also not sure that it didn't.
I didn't find it funny at all, but perhaps I just missed the joke.
Voices would be nice.
Good luck with your next animation :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your honest review. Unfortunetly I can't add voices because it's a silent film, so I have to play with the limits I give to that genre. The humour is tame, I will admit that. Thank you for responding.
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The animation was good, I like your style.
The music was an interesting pick, but I liked it.
It could have used some voices.
It was kinda funny I guess, I didn't really get the joke if there was one so perhaps the word amusing would better describe it.
All in all not bad, keep up the good work :)
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I couldn't really play it though, I'm all alone... But I won't hold that against you.
It looked really good, the game play was good, I liked this style of game and the sound was decent (music wouldn't hurt though).
It was rather amusing too, good job on this :)
Author's Response:
thanks for your comments .(^_^).
I love listening your feedback and actually I still working on single player version..
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I'd love to be able to play it, but I can't...
Perhaps you could put it in English so a larger audence could enjoy it?
At the very least you could have an English version added on to it.
Like I said, it looked great, Im sure it's very fun to play, but I wouldn't know...
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Pretty funny stuff.
the drawings could use some work but they were still pretty good.
I liked the whole theme of the nimation, good idea.
The voice acting was good, not great but certainly not bad. the music got a little repedative, I was sick of it by the end but it did fit well.
This was pretty good. Good luck with your next animation :)
Author's Response:
Yeah. It's hard to pick out ambient music to play throughout the whole movie and not draw too much attention away from the actual cartoon. So naturally that would mean very consistent, repetitive music. Thanks for the review!
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The graphics were great.
I loved how the bees were drawn and animated.
I really enjoyed that song. Some sound effects would have been nice.
It was rather funny in addition to being a great, fun game.
Keep up the good work :)
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"Diturbing I believe is the word I'm looking for..."
Yes, quite disturbing, but very well done.
Graphics were decent, I liked your style, the sound was rather good and it was kinda funny, I think?
Keep up the good work :)
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